印度洋赛季优胜作品英译（一）

李世纯

神从不担心自己

作者：卢时雨

一座寺庙，建在悬崖边
我担心：万一泥石流山体滑坡怎么办

我问小沙弥，小沙弥说从没这样想过
问老和尚，他笑而不答，仿佛和他无关

不必再问菩萨了，他们从来不会担心自己


God Never Worries About Himself

by Lu Shiyu

A temple, built beside the cliff
My worry is: what if mudflow and landslide happen

I asked the little novice, who never thought so
I then asked the senior monk, who smiled as if not a concern at all

No need to ask the Buddha again, they never worry about themselves（之前问过 the Buddha 可用 again，否则应用：anymore、either、too...等词语，虽然again中文 ）

李世纯

神从不担心自己

作者：卢时雨

一座寺庙，建在悬崖边
我担心：万一泥石流山体滑坡怎么办

我问小沙弥，小沙弥说从没这样想过
问老和尚，他笑而不答，仿佛和他无关

不必再问菩萨了，他们从来不会担心自己


God Never Worries About Himself

by Lu Shiyu

A temple, built beside the cliff
My worry is: what if mudflow and landslide happen

I asked the little novice, who never thought so
I then asked the senior monk, who smiled as if not a concern at all

No need to ask the Buddha again, they never worry about themselves （之前问过 the Buddha， 可用 again，否则应用：anymore\either\as well\too... ...等英文词语，虽然 again 有中文词义“再”）


五叔

李世纯

人性

作者：孩子的游戏

一块骨头
离间了两条狗的友谊

Humanity

by Haizi de Youxi

one bone
alienated two friendly dogs    （it's sure for a British or American to take them as：one bone alienated the two friendly dogs from their peers）

李世纯

let's have a try in : one bone would crack the friendship of two dogs

李世纯

朱峰 发表于 2018-8-26 13:46
这个建议可以接受。
翻的时候我考虑到了，但还是保留了，也没有觉得很 Chinglish

yes! we must take something about it, otherwise, in chinese it means:

一块骨头，从群里，拐走了两条面善的狗。

李世纯

李世纯 发表于 2018-8-28 20:38
yes! we must take something about it, otherwise, in chinese it means:

一块骨头，从群里，拐走了 ...

人性

作者：孩子的游戏

一块骨头
离间了两条狗的友谊

Humanity

by Haizi de Youxi

one bone
alienated two friendly dogs    （it's sure for a British or American to take them as：one bone alienated the two friendly dogs from their peers）




yes! we must take something about it, otherwise, in chinese it means:

一块骨头，从群里，拐走了两条面善的狗。