请懂英文的朋友帮忙检查 网友为我翻译的诗歌 我学习不用功,书到用时方狠少啊,为了中国云诗歌走向世界,特意请网友“天上的云”帮忙翻译了一首诗歌,请懂英文的朋友批评指点,不胜感谢。 翻译作者:天上的云 母亲啊 请闭上您的眼睛
' o9 Q. R8 |5 P5 b+ |(Mom, please close your eyes)
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4 e7 r4 j; J( u; @我在白云村日夜忙碌母亲瘫痪后的事( C1 m2 k+ m* K' z# v, T4 d4 R
I am busying in looking after my paralyzed mother day and night in BaiYun Village
! K' F) L; B8 F f8 n看每日农经 种植尽可能致富的植物
, N8 k) r+ Q) i+ |0 ~* \6 x) KStudy agronomy daily and planting economic plants as much as possible to get -rich-quick/ L6 l( C& ~( o/ a: P% a- C8 p6 L
村庄容得下我奔小康的梦想吗# T- D# O+ h5 Y/ y& ]: _) [! l
Would the village accommodate my fairly well-off dream?
: M2 {& u7 g, Q7 C- O' x! w我跟石头一样咬紧贫穷的牙关) M! d0 V5 }, T1 E- |2 D. J) X$ F
I set my impoverished teeth as stone
$ g3 U1 I: \ ^) j5 F. G和妻子在石头间挖掘美好幸福的阳光! I/ r$ k, q' w
Mining the beautiful sunshine with my wife amongst the stones
% k9 L& u5 ] J, |; C) F Z我们把未来的小楼房都设计好了! q- b& t* Z/ Q
Our small building for the future is well designed. @3 T% E% o9 ~/ U
需要有明亮的窗户来盛装东方斜射的光明$ y, V4 d* ` J9 G) T5 L
Having bright windows to contain eastern oblique light; J2 x- D2 O9 h& |$ {; J) _/ o( e
这样母亲就能感受到春天的温暖$ t* d. V6 `/ t+ D, a* t! n* C
So that my mom can feel the warmth of spring 僵硬的母亲像一只蜷缩的茧
* v7 W# m- S4 G+ _Mom lying like a curled up cocoon
$ J8 d1 {& h' Y: ^7 f" A5 M& I她病床对面空着父亲躺过的床
, I0 `/ ^6 q1 {: |# k$ ~: n; pOpposite to an empty bed of my father ever9 f) }/ A ]) x0 W$ K/ G
母亲像被烧过的锡纸眼角挂着凝重的眼霜
2 u1 S) g9 i! r/ ^/ `0 M* ELike a burnt tinfoil hung with solemn eye-cream in her canthus' w! z$ S% D( o% F8 F- n3 U
我知道您病得不轻啊谁又能拯救呢 e+ T; s8 W2 ^/ [
I know you are very ill, while who can save you?3 F6 p* r1 ~$ N) x0 d* m& d7 T
呵我亲爱的母亲您迷离的目光有如刀枪% o; ?4 T& N- h" {6 @$ D
Oh, my dear Mom, your blurred eyes like a sword
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几年过去了 我一直没有修好我们的房子3 @; m* W% X) a5 B; D: @- V
Over the years I cannot build up our house5 l$ ]6 Q8 r0 m4 o' E+ Q7 M. `
我们夫妻俩多少回蒙头流泪9 H! D9 j1 v$ q+ k% v
How many tears we wept hooded in bed - m( R3 O; D: V7 f
在您隔壁的子夜里我们听到了您的哭泣
2 x. j( w. T! `! j( M: pWe heard you cry in the midnight on your next door
3 l7 e" F" x3 F( K& F: w" K, ]9 J" U' _我们不敢注视您的眼睛啊
, k9 k5 W7 K( c4 w% v, ]5 VWe dare not look into your eyes y( e! u, g, H3 C9 R
因您的病不可救药 神明也束手无策
/ W' J1 N7 V4 t0 O$ y6 a6 n, {Because of your illness is far beyond remedy,
+ M# B) W" M# ?even god can do nothing 来看望您的人都用善意的谎言祝福您早日康复
" Y9 y V3 Z; GPeople come to see you with well-meaning crammer wishing you a speedy recovery5 G5 x" Z* H7 A$ A
我却希望您早一天把眼睛闭上1 j9 F+ [: ^1 A1 q7 x; i7 }4 r
I hope you close your eyes even one day earlier
3 Q6 F5 u( F7 A+ }* R闭上您的眼睛就等于打开了无垠的蓝天
0 G$ @: Z% T' T! k0 gClose your eyes is equal to open the boundless blue sky; `. @* L2 p+ q" p2 N& e4 f+ K
闭上您的眼睛吧 母亲0 i& J f0 E& u L* { m, _( v
Please close your eyes, Mom 3 p5 i* p3 b9 @5 U7 w- ^
闭上您的眼睛我和妻子就可以用奶嘴哺育您的来生
9 u; u/ ^3 Y) J8 q- W1 iClose your eyes so my wife and I can use the nipple feeding your eternity |